The Plan that Creates Screenwriting Careers
by Hal Croasmun
There's a quote I've heard around Hollywood many
times -- "Every
writer is just one script away from a career." Translated, it means
that with the right screenplay, you're in business.
For some people, that "one script" is
their first. For others, it is
their 20th. It all depends on how fast you gain an understanding of
the skills and concepts that make a highly marketable screenplay.
To accomplish that, let's discuss what you need
to succeed in
this business:
A. A solid plan that can produce success.
B. The resources to make that plan happen.
C. The willingness to do what it takes to make the plan happen.
Before you think that I just said "If you
have a plan and resources,
you can succeed," look back and you'll see more in those three
lines.
First, it is a SOLID plan that CAN PRODUCE SUCCESS.
That
means that it considers the marketplace and what they will buy
and it gives you a step-by-step process to produce that quality of
screenplay and get it to the buyers.
Second, you need the RESOURCES to MAKE THAT PLAN
happen. This means time, effort, and money when necessary.
But money is the least of the three, by far. Most importantly,
you need to acquire the skills to write at the quality level that
Hollywood requires.
Third, you need the willingness to make that
plan happen. I am
often inspired by screenwriters who continue to take whatever
effort is required. When I watch a writer enter my classes at a low
level and five months later, send me a screenplay that is written at
a professional level, I'm inspired. When I see a writer who has a
great script promote it to everyone who could possibly buy it, I'm
inspired. When I hear back from a writer who started only two
years ago and yesterday, she had her script optioned, I'm inspired.
Before I present the first part of a plan that
could work for you,
there is one more thing that you must know.
IMPORTANT: To create a truly marketable script,
you plan and
design it from the very first step in the process. Marketability
doesn't just appear after you've written your screenplay.
You'd be amazed how many times a writer has asked
me how to
make their script marketable...after they've written it. Their story
may be wonderful, but from a "marketability perspective," it has
major problems at the concept level, the outline level, the
structural level, and in many other places.
Instead of that, what if you build marketability
into your script
from the very first decision?
Here's a 12 step plan that we use in the PRO
SERIES that produces
writing and projects at a professional level:
THE PLAN
1. Start with a marketable concept.
In the first weekend of any movie release, two
things sell the movie
to an audience -- the concept and bankable actors.
Here's the good news, you have 100% control over
one of those
extremely important factors -- the concept. Isn't that amazing? As
a writer, you actually have more control of whether a movie does
well at that box office than most Studio execs.
A marketable concept is one that is unique in
a significant way
and appealing to a wide audience.
Make sure your concept is as marketable as possible.
This is the
place where the screenwriter has the greatest power. Don't waste
your chance to "Wow!" them with your concept.
2. Create characters that A-list actors
will want to play.
Most likely, you won't be able to interact directly
with A-list actors,
but it is still very important that your characters are appealing to
bankable actors.
Why?
Because the public attends movies with stars
they like. So it is
easier for a producer to secure funding for a script they have stars
attached to. Naturally, that is one of the first things producers look
for in a script.
3. Outline your script to make sure every
part of it is dramatic
and fresh.
If you want to make sure your story is marketable
and will work for
a Hollywood production company or Studio, take a few days to
create an amazing outline.
I get so many scripts submitted that have problems
that could
easily have been solved in the outline stage. Instead, the writer is
willing to do ten different rewrites to avoid creating an outline in the
beginning.
Here's a tip: If you can't create a compelling
outline for the story,
your script will probably never be more than mediocre.
When you create an outline, you have the chance
to test the quality
of your plot, subplots, scenes, twists, turns, opening, ending, etc.
It is so much easier to solve problems before the story is covered
with thousands of words and images.
Even more important, the outline is the chance
to design even
more amazing situations into your story. Often, looking at a 10-
page outline will have you see many places you can improve to
bring your story to a professional level.
Don't let anything keep you from the creative
opportunities that
outlining can provide.
4. Write a great opening that will engage the reader and audience.
While the Indie market may be accepting of slow
openings, the
Hollywood market isn't.
Some people think it takes many pages to reveal
character. I think
you can start on page one and reveal your characters through their
first actions and lines of dialogue. It isn't an easy thing to do, but
it is doable, and that will have your writing stand out as
professional.
Remember, your first page is your first impression.
If you make
it a great one, you'll have the reader, agent or producer feel like
they are in the hands of a professional. That's the first impression
you want, isn't it?
Read the article I wrote last year titled "Your
First Page Sells Your
Script" and you'll see what I'm talking about. You'll also see some
great examples of how the first page can engage the reader.
5. Make sure every scene is extremely engaging.
Properly designed, each scene will re-engage
the reader's
attention. One scene will lure them in. The next will surprise them.
The next will create suspense. Follow that with an ironic scene,
then a crucible scene.
Whatever order you choose, you need to make sure
of two things:
A. That you have a variety of different scene
structures to
make sure the script doesn't feel predictable.
B. That for each scene, you choose the scene
structure that
will yield the most value in terms of curiosity, drama,
and entertainment.
Scene structure is overlooked by many, but it
can be a major asset.
6. Make sure every page demands that
the reader reads on.
In general, readers are overworked. So your job
is to make it almost
impossible to put your script down until every page has been read.
By the end of each page, you want them wondering
or worrying
about what will happen next. The more they are curious about the
future of your story, the more likely they'll continue reading.
It could be as simple as a line of dialogue calling
the protagonist's
goal into doubt or the entire scene could put your protagonist into
the worst spot of their life. Just keep them wondering and your
script will get read.
7. Use terse description that gives more
meaning than words.
Brief. Concise. Crisp. Get it?
Just as important, many times, a short sentence
can deliver more
emotion and power than an entire page when you've selected the
right words. This is especially true of initial character descriptions.
If you want great description, practice finding
ways to deliver a
powerful message with as few words as possible.
8. Have dialogue that actors will fight
to keep in the script.
Imagine dialogue that is full of subtext, anticipation,
and surprise.
If you provide that and deliver maximum character in most of your
lines, actors will absolutely love you.
Great dialogue comes from understanding your
characters very
well, but it also comes from having the flexibility to create 25 or 50
or even 100 different ways to say the same line. And that means
truly understanding the different places a character might deliver
a line from.
Consider a character who drops their plate in
a restaurant. What
would they say if they were embarrassed? How about angry?
How about if they have a strong need for attention? What if one
of their traits is "humorous?" Or "violent?" Or "sophisticated."
Notice how a small change in the character will change their
dialogue in the same situation.
The more you know about different types of dialogue
structures,
the more amazing your characters and their dialogue will be.
9. Finish with a 3rd Act that generates the BUZZ that is necessary
to get the script sold.
Your third act should take the conflict and tension farther than either
the first or second acts. It should have the following components,
but they should deliver more emotion and meaning than anything
we've seen so far.
- Turning point that
propels us toward the final conflict.
- An emotional crisis that demands a confrontation.
- The climax where the protagonist and their
biggest fear
(often the antagonist) come face to face to fight it out.
- The final scenes that bring the movie to a
resolution.
Done correctly, the third act will be the most
engaging of all the acts
and it will bring the movie to a close that leaves an audience
breathless.
BTW, it is not the "formula" that delivers
this quality entertainment
experience, it is two extremely important qualities that are missing
from the majority of the scripts sent to Hollywood. Those are:
A. Giving the surprising, yet inevitable experience.
B. Having the final pages deliver profound meaning.
Bring those two qualities to your ending and
you will be a star.
10. Design marketing materials and a marketing plan that will
get
the script in the hands of the right producers.
You've written an amazing script that has a High
Concept and now
it is time to market it. At this point, please don't make the mistake
that most screenwriters make -- writing a synopsis/query letter that
tells your story.
"What?! Why wouldn't I tell my story?" you
must be asking.
Because telling your story is different than "selling" your
story,
that's why. 99% of the marketing materials I see are so poorly
written that only desperate "producers" will request them.
You need to switch hats. Take off the "screenwriting
hat" and put
on the "marketing hat." As an expert in marketing, you have one
objective -- to hook the top producers into demanding your script!
So every word of your marketing materials needs
to be designed
to build more and more curiosity until the producer becomes
obsessed with reading your script. Often, that means "selling"
your story in a completely different way than you would "tell" it.
Once your marketing materials do that, you do
some simple
research to generate a list of 25 - 50 (or more) producers who may
possibly be interested in your project. Targeting the right producers
is a valuable strategy that dramatically increases your chances
of REAL success.
11. Use the "33 Ways to Break Into Hollywood" strategies
to
market until you have a deal or everyone has passed on it.
Even though you've targeted the right producers, it is still valuable
to pursue the "33 Ways" strategies. In our marketing class, we
create an entire campaign around these strategies. That way, if
one thing doesn't work, you still have five, ten, or even twenty
other strategies that could possibly get your career started.
If you haven't downloaded "33 Ways," you
should immediately.
I believe that the more strategies you have, the more confidence
you'll have. And if you have a great script, you'll be able to
come to Hollywood with a multiple-strategy marketing plan that
will give you an amazing edge.
Download it
here.
12. Whatever the result, return four months later with the
next High
Concept script.
This business isn't about one project. It is
about consistently
returning to your contacts with the next great movie. Do that and
you'll build a career. Even if this one doesn't sell, you are still
creating a reputation. If the writing is great, they'll want to read
your next script.
So get back on the horse. Generate another High
Concept idea
and pour your soul into the writing. Go through the first eleven
steps again. This time you may have a sale and guess what?
The second your next script sells, they'll want to take another look
at this one. Hollywood is famous for rejecting script after script,
then the moment you become hot stuff, they buy the same scripts
they passed on.
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Every one of these steps is covered well in
the ProSeries where
writers learn 20 to 40 techniques for accomplishing each step.
If you can't attend the upcoming ProSeries, you can accomplish
something similar by analyzing the best screenplays out there
and continually focusing on how the best writers perform these steps.
Master these twelve steps and you'll most certainly
have a career
as a paid screenwriter. If that is truly your dream, you should do
whatever it takes to become highly proficient at each step.
Remember, you are one script away from
a career -- if that
screenplay is a true masterpiece. You can do it!