2. Create characters that
A-list actors will want to play.
Most likely, you won't be able to
interact directly with A-list actors,
but it is still very important that your characters are appealing to
bankable actors.
Why?
Because the public attends movies
with stars they like. So it is
easier for a producer to secure funding for a script they have stars
attached to. Naturally, that is one of the first things producers look
for in a script.
3. Outline your script to
make sure every part of it is dramatic
and fresh.
If you want to make sure your story
is marketable and will work for
a Hollywood production company or Studio, take a few days to
create an amazing outline.
I get so many scripts submitted
that have problems that could
easily have been solved in the outline stage. Instead, the writer is
willing to do ten different rewrites to avoid creating an outline in the
beginning.
Here's a tip: If you can't create
a compelling outline for the story,
your script will probably never be more than mediocre.
When you create an outline, you
have the chance to test the quality
of your plot, subplots, scenes, twists, turns, opening, ending, etc.
It is so much easier to solve problems before the story is covered
with thousands of words and images.
Even more important, the outline
is the chance to design even
more amazing situations into your story. Often, looking at a 10-
page outline will have you see many places you can improve to
bring your story to a professional level.
Don't let anything keep you from
the creative opportunities that
outlining can provide.
4. Write a great opening that will engage the reader and audience.
While the Indie market may be accepting
of slow openings, the
Hollywood market isn't.
Some people think it takes many
pages to reveal character. I think
you can start on page one and reveal your characters through their
first actions and lines of dialogue. It isn't an easy thing to do, but
it is doable, and that will have your writing stand out as
professional.
Remember, your first page is your
first impression. If you make
it a great one, you'll have the reader, agent or producer feel like
they are in the hands of a professional. That's the first impression
you want, isn't it?
Read the article I wrote last year
titled "Your
First Page Sells Your
Script" and you'll see what I'm talking about. You'll also see some
great examples of how the first page can engage the reader.
5. Make sure every scene is extremely engaging.
Properly designed, each scene will
re-engage the reader's
attention. One scene will lure them in. The next will surprise them.
The next will create suspense. Follow that with an ironic scene,
then a crucible scene.
Whatever order you choose, you need
to make sure of two things:
A. That you have a variety of
different scene structures to
make sure the script doesn't feel predictable.
B. That for each scene, you choose
the scene structure that
will yield the most value in terms of curiosity, drama,
and entertainment.
Scene structure is overlooked by
many, but it can be a major asset.
6. Make sure every page
demands that the reader reads on.
In general, readers are overworked.
So your job is to make it almost
impossible to put your script down until every page has been read.
By the end of each page, you want
them wondering or worrying
about what will happen next. The more they are curious about the
future of your story, the more likely they'll continue reading.
It could be as simple as a line
of dialogue calling the protagonist's
goal into doubt or the entire scene could put your protagonist into
the worst spot of their life. Just keep them wondering and your
script will get read.
7. Use terse description
that gives more meaning than words.
Brief. Concise. Crisp. Get it?
Just as important, many times, a
short sentence can deliver more
emotion and power than an entire page when you've selected the
right words. This is especially true of initial character descriptions.
If you want great description, practice
finding ways to deliver a
powerful message with as few words as possible.
8. Have dialogue that actors
will fight to keep in the script.
Imagine dialogue that is full of
subtext, anticipation, and surprise.
If you provide that and deliver maximum character in most of your
lines, actors will absolutely love you.
Great dialogue comes from understanding
your characters very
well, but it also comes from having the flexibility to create 25 or 50
or even 100 different ways to say the same line. And that means
truly understanding the different places a character might deliver
a line from.
Consider a character who drops their
plate in a restaurant. What
would they say if they were embarrassed? How about angry?
How about if they have a strong need for attention? What if one
of their traits is "humorous?" Or "violent?" Or "sophisticated."
Notice how a small change in the character will change their
dialogue in the same situation.
The more you know about different
types of dialogue structures,
the more amazing your characters and their dialogue will be.
9. Finish with a 3rd Act that generates the BUZZ that is necessary
to get the script sold.
Your third act should take the conflict and tension farther than either
the first or second acts. It should have the following components,
but they should deliver more emotion and meaning than anything
we've seen so far.
- Turning point that
propels us toward the final conflict.
- An emotional crisis that demands a confrontation.
- The climax where the protagonist and their
biggest fear
(often the antagonist) come face to face to fight it out.
- The final scenes that bring the movie to
a resolution.
Done correctly, the third act will
be the most engaging of all the acts
and it will bring the movie to a close that leaves an audience
breathless.
BTW, it is not the "formula" that
delivers this quality entertainment
experience, it is two extremely important qualities that are missing
from the majority of the scripts sent to Hollywood. Those are:
A. Giving the surprising, yet
inevitable experience.
B. Having the final pages deliver profound meaning.
Bring those two qualities to your
ending and you will be a star.
10. Design marketing materials and a marketing plan that will
get
the script in the hands of the right producers.
You've written an amazing script
that has a High Concept and now
it is time to market it. At this point, please don't make the mistake
that most screenwriters make -- writing a synopsis/query letter that
tells your story.
"What?! Why wouldn't I tell
my story?" you must be asking.
Because telling your story is different
than "selling" your story,
that's why. 99% of the marketing materials I see are so poorly
written that only desperate "producers" will request them.
You need to switch hats. Take off
the "screenwriting hat" and put
on the "marketing hat." As an expert in marketing, you have one
objective -- to hook the top producers into demanding your script!
So every word of your marketing
materials needs to be designed
to build more and more curiosity until the producer becomes
obsessed with reading your script. Often, that means "selling"
your story in a completely different way than you would "tell" it.
Once your marketing materials do
that, you do some simple
research to generate a list of 25 - 50 (or more) producers who may
possibly be interested in your project. Targeting the right producers
is a valuable strategy that dramatically increases your chances
of REAL success.
11. Use the "33 Ways to Break Into Hollywood" strategies
to
market until you have a deal or everyone has passed on it.
Even though you've targeted the right producers, it is still valuable
to pursue the "33 Ways" strategies. In our marketing class, we
create an entire campaign around these strategies. That way, if
one thing doesn't work, you still have five, ten, or even twenty
other strategies that could possibly get your career started.
If you haven't downloaded "33
Ways," you should immediately.
I believe that the more strategies you have, the more confidence
you'll have. And if you have a great script, you'll be able to
come to Hollywood with a multiple-strategy marketing plan that
will give you an amazing edge.
Download
it here.
12. Whatever the result, return four months later with the
next High
Concept script.
This business isn't about one project.
It is about consistently
returning to your contacts with the next great movie. Do that and
you'll build a career. Even if this one doesn't sell, you are still
creating a reputation. If the writing is great, they'll want to read
your next script.
So get back on the horse. Generate
another High Concept idea
and pour your soul into the writing. Go through the first eleven
steps again. This time you may have a sale and guess what?
The second your next script sells, they'll want to take another look
at this one. Hollywood is famous for rejecting script after script,
then the moment you become hot stuff, they buy the same scripts
they passed on.
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Every one of these steps is covered
well in the ProSeries where
writers learn 20 to 40 techniques for accomplishing each step.
If you can't attend the upcoming ProSeries, you can accomplish
something similar by analyzing the best screenplays out there
and continually focusing on how the best writers perform these steps.
Master these twelve steps and you'll
most certainly have a career
as a paid screenwriter. If that is truly your dream, you should do
whatever it takes to become highly proficient at each step.
Remember, you are one script
away from a career -- if that
screenplay is a true masterpiece. You can do it!